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Confiscated Twins 5: Have your say
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October 28, 2013
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I would like to see Clara brutally raped as well. But I like that Clara is not technically enslaved so I'd like to see her get blackmailed into doing other things that leads her into a gangbang or whatever. Maybe have Amanda blackmail her into offering her friends, family maybe even her teachers her body for money and Clara has to raise a certain amount of money for her. Or maybe Clara does some community service for the local santas (Christmas!), I don't know. 

October 28, 2013
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AntonB said
I guess I'd like to see a focus on Claire (if the picture doesn't already hint at that being the case). She's sort of the last character that's yet to be explored.

I definitely feel Claire has a dominant streak in her, and she's into girls (the second comic in the series showed that nicely I think). With that in mind I think I'd like her as Amanda's slave. F/f. That seems the most degrading to her in my opinion. A dominant person being forced to submit and being forced to service a girl instead of being serviced herself.

 

I also sort of envy Roy getting his twins back as well. It seems weird to have them split up at least. That sort of ruins the fantasy of twins in the first place I think.

 

I guess I'm imagining a scenario where Roy gets his twins back from Amanda, and his father gets Ms. Bauer, in exchange for selling Claire to Amanda, and then seeing how she just breaks her down (and maybe lets her brother/father fuck her then).

I actually love this idea! This can also set the stage in the future for Roy's family to plan the downfall of Amanda. The first step being trading Claire for the twins and their mother, then eventually enslaving Amanda and let Claire have her revenge. In the end they can make Amanda the slave of slaves and even allow the twins to gangbang her once in a while in whatever way they please! That would be absolutely sick!!!

October 29, 2013
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Add a second set of blonde twins!  Their story of being fugitives and giving their bodies for shelter and food as they try to escape.  Eventually they get enslaved again.

Have the Bauer twins transported back.  They need to trade responsive sex for food.

Add some of Roy's friends and other girls from the school who are enslaved.

More girls submitting to men by kissing and licking their feet.

October 29, 2013
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Twins gang-bang for sure. And more attention on them. After all, this is twins serial, and it is not every day to see perfect looking blonde twins at all, not even say them being sexual slaves. :)

Would not suggest complete scene, because I like how you surprise us in comix in latest time (from Bianca hiding in the room till Anna being lend over in last comix), but would just say that would be nice to play with stereotypes… Blonde, perfect looking twin sisters, and some totally brutal, low-life monsters. Maybe construction workers again would not be bad, but I am sure you can figure out something better. :)

October 29, 2013
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I'd like to see Clara and Roy brothers are blackmailed and humiliated by Amanda. An example would be:
Clara and Roy are sent to a sanatorium psquiatrico where they will perform very special patients (men and women, bound by hospital workers and own Amanda, including: feeding and drinking, showering with them while asean , dressing, playing sexual games among themselves and with patients, (whether straight, gay and lesbian) all sexy clothes, (Amada wearing leather clothing and fine lingerie and Roy dressed as a "sissy-boy" .

As for the twins twins arrogant and haughty, and Mrs.Bauer, I like to see them raped by bums, drunks and beggars in any alley or corner of the city, making demeaning acts that could have been thinking ever do, whether day or night.smile

October 29, 2013
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Coincido con la mayoría de los opinantes, me gustaría ver a Clara sometida por su hermano, sea por chantaje de Amanda o porque Roy se da cuenta de cuanto la desea.

Sobre las gemelas, ya han sido abusadas varias veces por los personajes principales, asi que por qué no dar un giro en la trama y que una de ellas comprenda la situación en donde está y se convierta en la más devota esclava sexual de Amanda, complaciéndola en todo y dejando que su otra hermana reciba todos los castigos?

Incluso dicho giro podría darse cuando Amanda chantajea a Clara y obliga a una de las gemelas a violarla, la rabia de ésta por las humillaciones a las que ha sido sometida por Roy y su hermana le llevan a disfutar de los castigos que le da a Clara, en ese momento se da cuenta del morbo que siente al violar, amanda advierte esto y la convence de que haga lo mismo con su hermana.

Y la señora Bauer? supongo que al ver el cambio que sufre una de sus hijas, volviéndose malvada y entregándose a sus bajos instintos se pondría muy triste, entregándose a todo lo que tiene destinado para ella pero en un plan de completa degradación, de "ya nada me importa más en la vida", quizás siendo entregada a un burdel para ser explotada sexualmente…

Nos está quedando también a la otra gemela, que sufre todos los castigos, incluso los de su hermana, debería estar rabiosa de ira, sin entender como su hermana le puede traicionar así, si no me equivoco ellas eran unas hermanas presumidas y muy altaneras, quizás podríamos incluir a un nuevo personaje, algún muchacho tipo nerd, gordo, del que las hermanas Bauer se mofaban y ahora logra tener sesiones con esta hermana y hacerla sufrir con inventos curiosos.

Por último me resta Amanda, qué podemos hacer con una mujer la cual parece disfrutar de todas las cosas sexuales? Pues no sé, que aparezca su viejo y anciano padre, el cual abusaba de ella cuando era más joven (y aprovechamos ahí par mostrar a Amanda más inocente y algo de su tenebroso pasado), y que el viejo logre abusar de ella nuevamente, trayendo todos los traumas y recuerdos nuevamente…

 

Bueno, eso es todo lo que se me ha ocurrido por ahora, si se me ocurre algo más ya se los diré. Y espero los comentarios de Fernando con todas nuestras ideas, al fin y al cabo él es el artista y estaría bueno saber qué piensa de cada idea para saber cual podemos desarrollar y cual no. 

 

 

October 29, 2013
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Suggestions:

Top of the list: Clara being forced to orgasm.

Amanda forces Clara to get a more advanced model of the implants the twins have. This model has sensors that determine what Clara is doing (sitting, walking, sleeping, going to the bathroom, whatever) and even transmits what she is saying as it is also connected to her vocal chords. That way the device can be preset to trigger under different circumstances, making life difficult for Clara. Because of Amanda Clara's boyfriend has dumped her.

Amanda lets Roy borrow the twins if he agrees to Amanda using a strapon on him. Very humiliating for Roy but he submits, still planning his revenge. When Amanda begins to talk about leasing the twins out to others for months at a time, Roy purposefully gets both the twins pregnant, lessening their market value and pissing Amanda off.

Then all thru the rest of the story the pregnant twins complain (mostly silently or to each other) about morning sickness, clothes not fitting, breasts swelling and leaking etc. Amanda is not pleased when Raquel/Sara pukes all over her carpet. Mrs Bauer unhappily gets more attention from everyone now that the twins are knocked-up.

For the end of the story: Roy's mom is pissed off with Amanda for stealing her husband and hires a private investigator to look into Amanda's past. The shocking things she discover/powerful enemies from Amanda's secret past enable her to take control over Amanda, freeing her family and setting herself up as queen bitch instead. By then Roy and Clara has gotten so used to being forced to fuck that they just continue. 

 

October 29, 2013
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I know you asked for suggestions, but with the similarities of the ideas posted here, I feel that I'm not going to be surprised.

Please, keep a surprise element, add something unexpected, thats my biggest petition.

October 29, 2013
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Thank you for this opportunity Fernando!

First of all I would like to say: Rely on your sense for kink, since I do not like some of the posted ideas (i.e.omg no gay actions!!!) and you rape, gang bang and blackmail ideas fitted so nicely yummi yummi :) .

 

That being said, I suggest to focus on the Baur twins. They are the stars of this comic like the title indicates. Therefore, I agree with godofthunder

godofthunder said
Twins gang-bang for sure. And more attention on them. After all, this is twins serial, and it is not every day to see perfect looking blonde twins at all, not even say them being sexual slaves. :)
Would not suggest complete scene, because I like how you surprise us in comix in latest time (from Bianca hiding in the room till Anna being lend over in last comix), but would just say that would be nice to play with stereotypes… Blonde, perfect looking twin sisters, and some totally brutal, low-life monsters. Maybe construction workers again would not be bad, but I am sure you can figure out something better. :)

and others who would like to see "them raped by bums, drunks and beggars in any alley or corner of the city". Due to that sexual actions against Amanda or Clara should be the rare icing on the cake. In general, I dislike F/f or selfpleasuring, a dick should be always included :-) .

 

I recommend three things when focusing on the Baur twins:

1. Haughtiness, haughtiness, haughtiness

There should be a way to give the twins some selfrespect back whichs makes them haughty as they are. Followed by heavy degrading actions like gang bangs etc. In my opinion it is much more tasty to break such haughty girls and transform them into mindless sexslaves, then fucking this mindless sexslaves over and over again. Therefore, there should always be some hope for them, maybe some kind of rescue, but with the inevitable fallback at the end :-) .

2. Against each other

There should be situations in which the relief for one twin is the doom for the other twin. For example: The first twin who blows 10 guys at school avoids to get fucked by a really brutal monster. Maybe the blow job result is 10:9 so that all the efforts of one twin were useless or even one twin could sabotage the other. This could take place because twin A stated that she would not take part in this kinky game but begins to blow the guys behind the back of twin B in order to reach 10 blowjobs first  (example: twin B finds out of the deception of twin A and offers some guys at school some assfucking, if they refuse or cheat twin A when she gives head trying to reach the amount of 10 first). I think it is very spiecy when they  offering her body "voluntary" to other guys just to avoid some other fucking :-) .

 

Another thought: Both twins are strapped to a kinky device and actions which provide relief for twin A result in pain for twin B. For example the more one twin is fucking the other with a terrific dildo, the less electro shocks she receives… However, this works also in the reversed order… So both twins raise in levels of lust and pain, provided by each counterpart.

 

3. Last but not least

All kinds of gang bangs, double penetration, bondage, pain, blackmail, humiliation (!!!), swallowing, maybe beasty actions etc.

 

Thanks for reading.

 

 

 

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I'm quite simple to satisfy.

Gimme piercings – lots of them and once applied don't forget them here and there ;)

Well, some blood would be nice, too -bg-

But rings are better

… 

 

Oh and of course USE them.

 

Yeah that's all, the rest is up to you. THX

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