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Confiscated Twins 5: Have your say
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October 31, 2013
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bonjour oui je pence qu'il manque Clara qui deviens vraiment soumise a Amanda après la sextape et deviens une chienne que sont frère utilise par chantage avec Amanda 

je pence que tout le monde a envie de voir Clara en esclave ^^

October 31, 2013
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I'd like to see, like the vast majority , as the twins Bauer, and his mother Mrs. Bauer have sex

between them , yet get fucked and raped by people deconocidas alleys of the city, such as

drunks , vagrants , street criminals , homeless, beggars , etc … , all located in public places such

as city streets , public urinals of any bar , gas station, train station , bus , etc ….., and course,

dressed as a brothel whores .

With all this I want to see is arrogant whores and Bauer , humiliated and physically and mentally

shattered , and used throughout all the social class to which they despised .

 

As Clara and Roy , I would like to see sex scenes between them, bound by Amanda and in the

presence of the father of Clara and Roy . Scenes in which Clara violate his brother Roy and vice

versa , a dance romantic scene between them , kissing and touching each other lasciviously . Also

scenes and sex games brothers with Amanda .wink

November 1, 2013
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Hello Fernando and everyone,

the possibility to voice my opinions and share ideas on the upcoming comic in this thread made me to register to this forum. Thanks for this.

Firstly, before I go on rambling about my visions on the fifth instalment of the Twins series, I would like to thank you Fernando for setting such a short deadline (Christmas) for your next work. I really thought that I would need to wait for ~spring 2014 to come, but what a pleasant surprise. All this conceptual sketches, inking, colouring and shading must take a lot of time and hard work so thanks once again.

Putting aside the content of the comics, the drawing style of yours It’s what I really like, it’s easily my favourite among other artists featured at the DoFantasy/Fansadox website. The fact that you don’t exaggerate the anatomical proportions, do more complex shading and draw in this glamouresque style are all winning points for me. The only objection for me would be that I’m still waiting for a series that would feature a heroine with a really long, jet black, straight hair with a fringe (Clara is the perfect example, but she’s only a secondary character), because you already have blondes and red hairs as main protagonists ;-)

 

OK, back to the main topic. Below is the list of my plot propositions:

- In my opinion the gangbang scene is a must, furthermore it should be a highlight of the entire comic, not some scene spanning between only three panels but instead it should span by several pages or more.
- Maximizing the profit. To paraphrase Rybak’s bosses from upstairs, it’s time to up the ante; they should do as much as they can in this short amount of time. The previously mentioned gangbang scene should contain almost everything: DP (in all configuration: pussy/ass, pussy/pussy, ass/ass), triple penetration, quadruple (lol) penetration (I don’t know if this is the right terminology, but this happened to Brooke at the end of Dark Vengeance 2), some fisting (double fisting?) would be great too.

- It’s a shame that you rejected up-front additional piercings for Sara and Raquel. A live broadcast of a tongue and clit/labia piercing (that scene with Brooke in DV3 was a major turn on) on two hot teens would surely gain new viewers in the pay-per-view system ;-) Once again, it’s better to "milk the cow" before the China shipment.

- I’m not entirely comfortable with beggars and bums portion (as proposed by other forum members), although I can understand the reasoning behind them (humiliation). I guess I can get over if it would be a minor scene in the comic. Swapping bums to mere passer-by’s would be a different story.

- As for Clara the blackmailing method is a good idea, but in my version Amanda should threaten Clara to post pictures of her and Roy all over town and school and leak the video to the Internet if she won’t do as she says. Afterwards Clara should be forced to wear a mask (much like the one in the fourth part) with a cut-out for her eyes to see, a cut-out for the mouth in which there would be inserted a widening gag for deepthroat blowjobs and a little cut-out at the top of her head for a cute black ponytail, additionally some shackles on the hands and a collar with a leash. Thanks to that Clara wouldn’t be recognized and Amanda could take her for a trip to the town as her pet dog and force her to do a lot of things (this is my replacement for the beggars scene with the twins). Anyway, I would really like to see Clara getting a DP or even triple penetration treatment in some way (minus the dildos and alike).

- Not much of a plot scene, but it would be great if you could dress Raquel and Sara in lingerie (stockings, garter belts), high heels and some fancy lacy gloves (ha-ha, sorry It would be a pain to draw).

 

That’s all, I you could take some of this into consideration when making Confiscated Twins 5 than that would be wonderful.

Thanks for hearing me out.

 

PS. English is not my native language, and my proficiency in it is quite poor, so please forgive me if you had a hard time understanding what exactly did I meant.

November 1, 2013
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Here's a thought, not sure if someone has posted similar idea to it so sorry if that is the case:

 

Amanda lets' Roy fuck the twins whenever he wants on one condition.

 

For every load of cum he wants to shoot into Raquel or Sara, he must shoot two loads of cum into Clara first. So if he wants to pussy-fuck one of the twins, he has to pussy-fuck his sister twice. If he wants a rimjob from the twins, he must force Clara to rim him twice.

 

At first, this is to toy with Roy, forcing him to commit incest in order to get to the girls. It would be interesting to see how much he hesitates.

 

Eventually however he will cave. After all, he's already fucked his sister in all her holes so the deed is already done. This means he will willingly "work" for his access to the girls, which only means Clara gets the brunt of his needs.

November 1, 2013
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Hi Fernando.
In your last post you say nothing of Mrs. Bauer.
Do you have prepared something special for her, alone or with your children?
Thank you.smile

November 1, 2013
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In this episode, amanda needs money because she brocke up with her husband. To continue to live as she always did, she has to find a new way to earn money. Her new method will be mrs bauer. She will rent her to group of mens who will gangbang her in every kind of place. 

AmandA will give no chance to mrs bauer, if she doesn't act as a good whore, her daughter will be fucked by a group of homeless people during a week. To protect, her chield, mrs bauer will have no choice and she will became a perfect pornstar.

To broke her mind, amanda will Shoot all her sex performance and will oblige mrs bauer to watch it every time with some musik telling her "i'm a whore, i'm made to get gangbanged".  Amanda will also oblige mrs bauer to choose her whore clothes bevore getting gangbanged.

Concerning Roy and his sister, it will be great if clara would be dp by her brother and father. Amanda could have record her sex experience with roy's father and roy and clara little game. If they refuse to have sex together amanda will post the movies on youporn……

 

I wish that you like some of my idea, one thing is sure twins 5 will be great !

 

 

 

November 1, 2013
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I’ve just realized that Uncut isn’t a direct continuation to Confiscated Twins 4 <facepalm>.

Nonetheless, most of my propositions are still valid but with slight alterations, in example the gangbang scene would take place on the construction site/brothel/school instead of a prison facility.

November 1, 2013
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Afterwards Clara should be forced to wear a mask (much like the one in the fourth part) with a cut-out for her eyes to see, a cut-out for the mouth in which there would be inserted a widening gag for deepthroat blowjobs and a little cut-out at the top of her head for a cute black ponytail, additionally some shackles on the hands and a collar with a leash. Thanks to that Clara wouldn’t be recognized and Amanda could take her for a trip to the town as her pet dog and force her to do a lot of things (this is my replacement for the beggars scene with the twins). Anyway, I would really like to see Clara getting a DP or even triple penetration treatment in some way (minus the dildos and alike).

yes !!!!!!!! ^^ i love 

 

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Some great ideas in here. I especially like the idea of humiliating Clara in public with her face hidden (or maybe wearing a wig? I'd still like to see her pretty face to be honest)

 

What I also would like to see (besides Roy and Clara being forced to do all sorts of things to eachother) would be to see the Bauers getting a little revenge on Clara. Maybe that Amanda orders them to punish her or something like that.

 

But no matter what happens, I'm certain that Twins 5 will be another great work from you.

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Fernando said

Suggestions I find interesting (but in no way is guaranteed to be included):

    1. Twins played against each other (as suggested by okumo) -- a test of their loyalty to each other?

     

    Hi Fernando,

    hi everyone,

     

    it is quite an honor for me that you have considered my suggestion. Thanks for that! With respect to your question I would outline as follows:

     

    A good example could be the ferry boat scene from "Batman – The Dark Knight" transformed on sexual acts. In general, the relief for twin A has to be the doom for twin B, while both have to offer her bodies to men. So it could be test of their loyality.

     

    Possible Scenario

    Sara and Raquel will have to do ["insert horrible, painful, humiliating sex act here cool"] at the end of this week. However, the first twin who gave 25 blowjobs / fucks etc. to random people at school, beggars… will be spared from the sex act.

     

    Due to the contest it is a test of loyality. If they both refuse to give blowjobs, both will suffer the consequences. If one twin plays the game and succed, she will be spared from the sex act and it will be even worse for the other twin because she has to endure the sex act alone which was designed for two girls (gang bang for example).

     

    The special sweetness could be, that one twin reach the score of 25 blowjobs within time, while the other twin struggeled at 24. So the second twin has done almost 100% of the evil game and has to endure the sex act anyway while the first twin is spared big-grin.

     

    Furthermore, if their loyality is not the best, they may try to sabotage each other in order to reach the blowjob score first. For example Sara may offers males some assfucking later, if they refuse to get blowed by Raquel.* That way Sara will have an advantage to reach the blowjob score first in time. But the point is that she trades her body willingly to others / stangers in order to avoid other sex acts. Real turn on for me :-) .

     

    These are only some examples. In general, it deals about – like stated above – that the relief for twin A has to be the doom for twin B, while both have to offer her bodies to men.

     

    * Even better:

    For blowjob-score evidance reasons the twins have to be photographed after the facial cumshot, in order to prove their action. The guys do not refuse to get blowed by Raquel, but cheat her with the photo or something else. That way Raquel had blowed the male bootless / with no effect for the little game.

     

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