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Dark Vengeance 4: Have your say
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September 4, 2015
9:08 pm
Kurveball
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I like the Idea of another female in the mix say a Milf mother or say a sexy nosy neighbor getting to close to the action.

I would like some more debauched sex games with the girls, perhaps the girls have to be dp in the ass after sucking the guys off after a good caning. More lesbian sex with Holly and Broke with dildos and Brooke just pounds Hollys Ass with a strap -on as punishment for getting kidnapped by the gang while Mr Royce fucks Brooke from behind. 

More elaborate torture for the girls, being forced to lick each girls pussy out and the one who cums last gets fucked in the ass one by one by the gang, thus forcing the girls to compete and causing more friction with the girls.

 

Some how introduce Assbuster and Dogface into the mix with the cheerleaders at the end for a complete new spin off series . 

 

" Yeah Bitch this is nothing compared to what Ass buster will do to your ass"

 

" Hey slut the fun is only just started, we have a dozen men outside who paid thousand each to fuck your holes."

 

September 4, 2015
9:28 pm
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In terms of visuals I'm quite the fan of Brooke's ballet boots and leather harness outfit, and the clit ring and leash and all that stuff. I hope you stick with that wardrobe, and add more to it. It sort of makes her visual appearance quite unique amongst all the innocent blonde girls that float around in your comics.

 

I'd like a scene where either Holly or Brooke is forced to dominate, torture, or inflict pain on the other, especially if the story keeps building on Brooke's dislike of Holly, because of the situation she has gotten herself into.

 

And oral sex. This is probably the comic series that mostly emphasizes that, with all the training and what not they've gone through. So more of that.

 

And maybe you can add Holly's mom to the story?

 

Stuff like that is what comes to my mind right now. Either way I'm quite looking forward to it.

September 4, 2015
10:40 pm
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The girls should work against each other. For example the girl who fucks first 8 guys will be spared in the upcoming over night gang bang. Some mind fuck: If both refuse to fuck anybody, both will be spared. But if one girl refuses and the other girl fucks at least one guy, she that refused has to to some beastially kink. Though the girls have to anticipate which fuck action will be the best to be spared.

 

September 5, 2015
12:04 am
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Only one thing I would like to see less of is the recent use of red marks for several frames after the event, IMHO it makes the girls look used rather then sexy and since DV has more gang sex then T5&T6, I'm hoping it's not a new trend.

September 5, 2015
12:53 am
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Some great ideas being thrown around here.  I really liked the idea of having a lady cop hot on the trail of the missing persons who gets abducted herself and gets thrown in the mix.  Then you could have her torn – up cop uniform hanging off her body as they have thier way with her.  Oh, and she has handcuffs, which will come in handy and a nightstick, which can also be used for beatings and insertions.

I also liked the idea of the girls being pitted against one another in a contest to fuck more dudes than the other in a set amount of time in an effort to earn reprieve later.

Great ideas everyone!

Also, HOTT  picture of Brooke and friends!  Thanks for the teaser!

September 5, 2015
1:10 am
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"Damn ravioli sounds good tonight."

September 5, 2015
1:52 am
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Just thought of another caption:

 

"Smile, bitch—you're on Candid Camera!!!" big-grin

September 5, 2015
3:05 am
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I feel like this comic is perfectly set up for Brooke to be broken. You've already shown she's desperate enough to try suicide and she's developing a deep hatred for Holly so for her to snap in some deeper way seems logical. I like the idea of the gang giving Brooke a chance to punish Holly as long as she does whatever they say and Brooke wanting to get back at Holly so bad she agrees. So Brooke kinda moves from helpless sex slave to an enthusiastic little slut for the gang.

 

Then you could have scenes of the broken Brooke sucking and fucking and begging for cock of her own free will to try and earn some time with Holly. And maybe Brooke realizes it's much better than being tied up all day and starts to prefer this way of doing things? Plus I think it'd make a great scene for Holly to be fucked senseless by her father and former best friend.

 

There’s a lot of life in this as you now have Brooke now begging for (and possibly enjoying?) her abuse and Holly tied up being fucked like a sex toy and hating every second of it. But I do think if Brooke does switch sides like that we'd need a new girl too. At the very least the Brooke hating Holly stuff needs to be expanded on, it'd be cool if the gang let them fight or something. 

 

 

September 5, 2015
3:21 am
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I like the lady cop/detective, maybe FBI agent.  Expanding on that, what if there are partners, both females and both are in a lesbian relationship?  And one soon learns that she really likes the feel of cock in here.  Always like the mom and sister ideas too.

September 5, 2015
4:40 am
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Yes I agree with several other members here, the idea of having a lady cop getting abducted is pretty hot.

And Brooke will be broken and eventually "collaborate" with the gang.

Another idea, which I notice that Fernando never tried, is the female character getting pregnant, I remember Fernando said it could be a big turn-off for him, I guess it can be, but if you just indicate it in the conversations without actually drawing a pregnant female, it can be really hot. Just my opinion. 

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