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Dark Vengeance 4: Have your say
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September 5, 2015
4:45 am
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I was just re-reading DV again – In the first DV it is said that Hollys mum is dead, so we will have to make do with Brookes mum. Hmmm not a bad idea if milfs are going to be used and lady cops could spice things up big time. Lots of Lesbo action with handcuffs and baton.

 

wave

 

 

 

 

September 5, 2015
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First of all great pin up. I agree that a new character such as a cop would be a something new. Everybody seems to like the idea of Brooke being broken, which is a natural progression (even though dv3 did feel like a conclusion). This is good but it would be a shame not to continue to see her as the most abused victim. Having her work with the group takes a little something away from her, but I can see peoples point. I for one would like to see more of her fantasy escapes, her daydreams from dv3.

Alternatives could be one of the group of the original kidnappers doublecrosses or falls out with the group and makes off with one of the girls. This would be a great way to introduce the female cop, tracking them down.

Or even Mr Royce getting the upper hand, still in his new deranged persona getting the girls. You might need to think how to continue to add in the gangbangs. Or perhaps a gang war and a rival gang nabs the girls, now that could work.

Whatever happens I can't wait. Try find more ways to torture and humiliate, dildos straps, gags, plugs. How about getting the girls to eat the cum from each other after they have been used. Oh my the list could go on. Remember you can never have enough anal ;-)

 

Caption suggestions: you want me to stop, silly cunt, the parties only just started. Maybe this found fucking your about to get will help you realise your situation. Now start fucking and sucking.

 

I'm gonna fuck you so hard your grand kids are gonna hurt

 

Sorry baby, its always ass to mouth.

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September 5, 2015
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Suggestion - Tyrone is saying to Brooke:

 

'We are going to knock you up.'

 

September 5, 2015
7:54 am
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Great picture Fernando (as always)!

 

My suggestions for DV 4:

 

-I would like to see Hollys mother in the hand of the black gang (especially in the "hand" of the one-eyed guy) …

She would be perfect as third girl to humiliate the ill father more as usual.

… I know that you wrote in DV I that she would be dead … but hey, I want her so that the black gang can take more revenge to this family! Or at least a sister or the mother of Brooke ;) .

 

-The two girls should hate each other … let the black gang pit the two girls against each other in "painful Sex/Torture games" with horrible consequences for the loser girl (more pain! :) ).

 

-I would love to see this family reunion between Holly, her mother and the ill father (who from time to time should "awake" or be awakened from the gang with medicine from his illness and can't believe what he is doing to his daughter to humiliate him more).

 

-Let the black gang "sell"/"rent" the girls for/against other gang members for "special operations" in Gang Wars.

 

-Holly and her mother should suffer extremely under the one-eyed thug … I hope to see something like the piercing scene in Dead Shark Island, where the girl got pierced while she had a cock in her ass …

 

-Generally I would like to see in DV that the girls (especially Holly and her mother) suffer more (hooks, devices, painful triple penetrations, beating in the face, chocking with hands/cocks, facefucks, creampies) … DV is not sooo story driven (like Sex Wars) so I would appreciate more hardcore sex and painful scenes in fast order.

 

 

I hope to see some of my suggestions in DV 4 :) !

September 5, 2015
8:41 am
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LoveBlondeSlut said
Yes I agree with several other members here, the idea of having a lady cop getting abducted is pretty hot.

And Brooke will be broken and eventually "collaborate" with the gang.

Another idea, which I notice that Fernando never tried, is the female character getting pregnant, I remember Fernando said it could be a big turn-off for him, I guess it can be, but if you just indicate it in the conversations without actually drawing a pregnant female, it can be really hot. Just my opinion. 

I think Fernando has stated in the past that he is not really into impregnation scenarios for his stories.

 

September 5, 2015
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Yaqwsx, Holly's mother is not dead, it makes it clear in DV3. Holly's parents are divorced, it makes it clear when Mr. Marcus fucks Holly freshly showered and threatening his father. (page 25).

September 5, 2015
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I like the ideas Holly force, and Brooke, practicing lesbian games between them, and fucking each other, they fight for a miserable plate of beans or a little water.
Those sexual games, fights, and fucks, could also enter Holly's mother Julie.

As I said above I would like to see Julie's mother Holly as a new character.
And it easier to avenge by Holly Brooke, if it is through Holly's mother.

The situation would be: Brooke calling by cellular Holly's mother asking him to go find the house, to a particular direction because their car broke and have no money to travel in a taxi.
Although the situation seems strange Holly's mother does not ask questions and goes to that address, after all Brooke is the most intimate and best friend of his daughter.
When knocking on the door and it opens, your eyes can not believe what they see: Brooke dressed and made up like a whore.

Brooke!? !!? !!!? !!?! says Holly's mother in shock. Brooke grabs her wrist and "invited" to enter.
Welcome to the party-show Holly, bitch. "Enjoy and participate," her says.

September 5, 2015
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Mini Contest idea:

 

"Remember Brook, if Holly is able to fuck more nice college guys in 24 hours than you can fuck black brothers, we will set her free instead of you… So you better show some effort princes!!!"

 

 (to set any girl free is a lie obviously)

 

September 5, 2015
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Forgot to mention. More experimental hardcore sex. May have been already mentioned before. More devices, nooses, breath play. One of the girls choke if the other doesn't fuck a certain amount of gang members.

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Mini Contest ideas:

 

"Crying isn't going to help you…this is what you will be doing until we get rid off you"

 

"Aww look at you crying. You realize this only makes them fuck you even harder."

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